My short story

For this piece of writing I have focusing on my vocabulary and punctuation. I have been learning to :

• use a range of precise vocabulary to communicate meaning (Year ⅞)
• use all basic punctuation independently and attempt more complex punctuation (eg semicolons, colons, parentheses) (Year 7/8)  
• The pieces of my writing that are highlighted green are where I have shown my vocabulary and punctuation goal
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